Queer Writing for a Queer World
Author: David Heulfryn
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Neil turns up at the Fletcher’s house early in the morning. It is part of his provisional punishment, but Owen isn’t pleased with being woken so early.
Max talks to Neil, who opens up about his life and family. Neil seems to change as the boys talk, and Max begins to understand the boy who has made his life hell since he started school.
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Owen is unhappy being awoken by James knocking on the door. But Max is happy to see his boyfriend, and they are soon in bed together.
Another unexpected guest arrives, Adam. He wants to see Finn and tell him about his family, his step-brother in particular. Adam wants Finn to know about him and his step-brother before he answers the question Finn asked him when they first met.
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Dr Chapman knows what is causing Finn to have frequent nocturnal emissions and why he is producing such large quantities of semen when he ejaculates. He informs the family and releases Finn. But Finn will still need regular checkups.
The brothers are pleased to be home together. They spend some time together in their room, and come bedtime; they sleep together for the first time in a month.
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We would all like an easy straight road to get where we want to go, but life is seldom like that. For the past few months I’ve been winding my way through the crap life throws at you. On top of that, the Black Dog paid me a visit.
I’m feeling better now, but I’m still navigating my way through many responsibilities that are keeping me very busy. So I had to let a few things slip, unfortunately, Screeve was one of them. I am hoping to get back on track soon and later I will be posting another chapter of the Fletcher family in Cockaigne. I haven’t stopped thinking about them.
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Eddie waits excitedly for Max before they walk to school. Eddie says that he wants to wank together again. Max is non-commital, but Eddie thinks he’s agreed. Eddie kisses Max and laughs when he thinks he is coming on to him. He only has eyes for Finn.
But the day turns sour when they approach the school gates. Neil and his goons are waiting for Max.
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Max is on hand to help as Eddie gets agitated that his routine is being disrupted. The boys are taken to side and are let to see the nurse first. Eddie doesn’t initially understand what is expected of him, but then enjoys leaving his semen sample as Max watches.
Back at home and much to his father’s amusement, Max’s mother leaves some things on his bed to prove she is happy for her son to have a sexual relationship with James. But Max is mortified.
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Lily goes to Cockaigne Pharma to get the results of Finn’s prostate biopsy, and they finally get to understand what is happening.
Meanwhile, at the Cockaigne Academy, Nurses and Doctors have descended to test the students, causing more friction between Max and Neil.
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Finn gets taken for his prostate biopsy and has another involuntary ejaculation while lying on the examination table. Dr Chapman is fascinated as he watches Finn ejaculate, but he’s not watching his cock.
After school, Max and Finn’s friends come to visit, but Eddie isn’t with them.
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Finn is bored. He has nothing to do and is not allowed to masturbate to pass the time. He’s glad when he gets visitors after school and is pleased to see his brother and friends again.
Meanwhile, the doctors are still baffled and want to do further tests. Not happy with the biopsy of Finn’s testicles, they now want to biopsy his prostate.
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Finn is taken to Cockaigne Pharma to undergo further tests. He is annoyed that no one is treating him respectfully and begins acting petulantly to make a point.
In the operating theatre, Finn gives Dr Chapman a semen sample before he takes a biopsy of Finn’s testicles.
(I apologise if the description of the medical operation causes some of you some discomfort.)