Queer Writing for a Queer World
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Max and James take a leisurely bath when they have finished doing some gardening. Finn disturbs their peace as he and their parents return from shopping.
Finn finds his brother in the bath and gives him the present he bought last week. Max was surprised and shocked when he saw the brushed steel bracelet. ‘Max & Min Forever’.
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Finn is more concerned about what is happening to his body than he lets on. He finally opens up to his brother. Finn no longer enjoys masturbating and isn’t sure why. But while in bed with Max, he tells Max about Adam and manages to enjoy his first wank in weeks.
The following morning, Max is surprised as someone arrives in town on the Cockaigne Express.
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Sorry if I’ve left you dangling this past week. My work sent me to Sweden, and it isn’t easy to do much when you’re in a tiny budget hotel room in the evening. I didn’t even have a desk. But I had a great time. I was working during the week, but I was out with friends at the weekend. Some of you know I used to live in Sweden, and it was great to go back. I’d forgotten how much I miss living there. And I love those cinnamon buns; they are much better than the ones we get in the UK, even in Ikea.
But rest assured, normal service will now be resumed, and I will post another chapter about those beautiful brothers, Max and Finn, later today.
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Lily reminds Max to catch a sample of Finn’s semen if he cums again at night. Max keeps a jam jar by the bed, and when he is woken up by Finn’s writhing and moaning, he gets a relatively large sample.
It is Max’s last day wearing the cock cage. When he arrives at the Headmaster’s office to have it removed, Mr Price tells Max some background about Neil.
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Finn watches his brother getting caned and struggles to hold back his tears. Despite trying to find his brother, Finn cannot find him anywhere. At swim club, Finn remains sullen and Coach Anderson has to remind him how his class look up to him and no matter how terrible he feels, he has to put on a brave face.
Later that night, while in bed, Max and Finn discover they have a shared friend.
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Lily takes Finn to see the Doctor to get him checked out. She is concerned about the frequency of his wet dreams and the amount of semen he produces. Dr Wallace gives him a complete examination and finds nothing to be concerned about. He hopes that Lily has been reassured.
But afterwards, Dr Wallace calls the Clinical Director of Cockaigne Pharma. Finn is the second case of a teenager producing an abnormally large amount of semen. Could there be a problem with teen boys in Cockaigne?
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It’s the day Max gets the first part of his punishment, five strokes of the cane on his naked backside. He and Neil are paraded naked in front of the entire school, and the Headmaster takes an unforeseen opportunity to humiliate Neil. But Max still receives his five strokes.
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Despite being grounded, Max gets to see James, and they spend an intimate Saturday together. Max talked and talked, and James listened. It wasn’t the day they wanted, but it was the day they needed.
Owen also finds out why Lily is concerned about Finn when he sees the volume of semen he produces first-hand.
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Max is confronted by his mother when he gets home. She had taken a phone call from the headmaster who explained his punishment. She is angry and dissppointed with Max and sends him to his room. Lily wants to punish Max further by cancelling James’ visit.