Queer Writing for a Queer World
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Coach Anderson ambushes Finn while he’s having lunch with his friends, Adam and Scott. Coach praises Finn with teaching Eddie to swim. He tells Finn about Cockaigne Swin Club. They are meeting this evening and he asks Finn to come along. Not to start training, but to help coach some of the younger kids.
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Finn’s wet dreams are beginning to cause some concern. When Lily enters the boys’ bedroom, she finds that Finn has had a wet dream in both beds. She is annoyed that she now has double the washing. Lily tells Finn that he needs to masturbate more, hoping it will prevent the frequency of his nocturnal emissions.
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Finn gets in trouble with Coach Anderson, he doesn’t understand the level of discipline that’s expected of him. But he gets back in Coach’s good books by helping a fellow student learn to swim. All his time going to swim clubs has paid dividends and he is given an opportunity he never expected.
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Finn and Adam stay together after school for further tuition. Finn strips off and encourages Adam to do the same, but he is reluctant; Adam isn’t a nudist. He talks about Cockaigne, the punishments and how his father and step-brother were punished.
Later, in bed, Max and Finn talk about their first day at school. Finn tells how he asked Adam to be his boyfriend the first time he asked another boy out.
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The day has arrived. Max and Finn go to Cockaigne Academy and meet Mr Johnson. Changing schools will not be as easy as they first thought. They have a new syllabus, and the boys will need extra tuition. Finn is introduced to Adam, a student in his class, to help him settle in.
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Finn has had a difficult day. While Owen tries to keep Max and James’ sex life secret from Lily, he inadvertently pushes Finn aside. Finn is left alone, wondering what is going on. Everything is about Max and James. When Finn goes to bed angry, Max finally realises what the day was like for his younger brother.
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After suffering the side effects of their inoculation, the brothers wake up stiff and sore. Lily insists on washing their cum-stained bedclothes while the brothers sort out their stuff. As Max looks out of the window of the spare room, he sees his Dad pull up the driveway. In the passenger seat is a surprise that makes Max as giddy as a toddler.
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The brothers have returned from having their inoculation and are starting to feel the side effects. They go straight to their bedroom to deal with their problem, leaving Owen and Lily alone downstairs. Lily knows what they boys are up to and starts to feel horny.
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The Fletcher family have now moved to Cockaigne, but Max and Finn need their inoculation. Max knows he will be expected to get naked and has no problem with it, even knowing his Dad must be with him. But the Doctor asks Max some awkward questions that he is reluctant to answer in front of his father.
//I hope you have all enjoyed the final parts of “Conversations with My Brother”. It has been a joy to write.
I have purposefully given you all a week off from new posts to let you all take a break. I have also taken a week off from writing, but I have spent the week editing the next story, “The Chronicles of the Fletcher Family”, which explores the family’s life as they move to Cockaigne. I can promise you an exciting time is had by all, with some twists and turns as the brothers start a new life.
I’ve not posted any of the current series to Nifty yet. But I think I will combine parts so it doesn’t end up with a story with 45 separate posts, which tends to put me off reading a story.
“So why write one that long if it puts you off?” I hear you cry.
Well, Max and Finn just got under my skin, and I couldn’t let their story end.
This was my first story involving underage boys for many years. I have tended to steer clear of that age group because it can be controversial. Some stories I’ve read seem to appeal to an unsavoury element. I’ve tried to keep my story age appropriate and not salacious. It is a story about love. Max’s love for James and the platonic love the brothers have for each other. I also never intended the story to be an incest story. The brothers are never sexual with each other, but they become comfortable with nudity and their sexuality. Some scenes are close to the bone (pun intended), but there is never any sexual attraction between the brothers.
Much as I love Nifty, and it is a vital resource for all, I’d be interested to know which other sites you think I could post the story. My current favourite story site is GayDemon, but they do not accept stories that involve sex with minors, and I suppose mine comes under that category. So any suggestions would be appreciated.