The group arrive at the campsite and put up the tents. Ben is knackered from having no sleep and quickly falls asleep once his tent is up. When he wakes, he finds himself alone, the rest having gone to a nearby lake. Ben doesn’t know where they have gone, so he visits the ablution hut to shower. He meets the coach driver there, and they share a shower cubicle.
Lucky Charlie…
I see Max& Finn are on Nifty
Not sure why Max & Finn are in the celebrity category. Perhaps someone knows something I don’t. Although they are celebrities to the readers. I’m going to have to email the archivist and get it moved.
I see the boys are in the INCEST category now.
I’m glad it has moved. I’m not a fan of celebrity fiction, but that’s just my personnal preference (or perhaps no one has written about any celebs I can fantasise about)
When I submitted the story, I said it centred around the intamacy between the brothers and nothing sexual ever happened between them. My stories can sometimes be difficult to categorise. I’d be interested to know if people think “Incest” is the right category.
I have recieved some very nice emails from new readers thanks to Nifty.
INCEST is okay, but I would’ve put it in Young Friends or High School instead since there is no sex between Max & Finn (not even a bro blow).