Queer Writing for a Queer World
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David forgets that his best friend is coming over and he gets caught having his customary morning wank.
The first instalment, of six, if my very first series. It is a fantasy of what I wished would happen when I would go round and see my best mate. I’ve not read the other five parts yet and apart from a vague idea of what happens next, I can’t remember how this one pans out.
//I am currently writing the third instalment of the Cockaigne story staring the Dartos family and I have found myself writing a straight story.
When I created Cockaigne, it was a town featuring all types of people, gay, straight, people of colour, people from around the globe and people of all religions, or none. So when I introduced the Dartos family I had their sexualities fixed in my mind. The father, Doug was straight, his eldest son, Archie was straight and his youngest son, Leo would be gay. The first chapter involves Doug being humiliated by Officer Andy Noble, the second involves Leo (and will be published here soon) and I’m now on the third, staring the eldest son, Archie.
I’ve not written the all-important sex part of the story, but as I was writing it has veered towards straight sex. This is an area which I have had no experience. I hope it comes out alright and I hope, when I finally publish it here, you won’t all be put off. But rest assured there will be more cock and bum fun to come.
//Tom has reached the fantastic milestone of 40 chapters of his brilliantly disgusting story Bog Off. Chapter 40: Botanical gardens is as good as the first. I hope you are enjoying the series as much as I am.
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Another blast from the past and one that subtly betrays its age with the mention of a buffet carriage, they don’t exist on most trains these days, in the UK that it.
This was my second story to be published by TommyHawksFantasyWorld. After reading it again all these years later I am actually quite happy with it. The premise is simple, a chance meeting on a train, and the story flows quite well. I have always liked the idea of anonymous hook-ups, in writing anyway. I hope you all enjoy it too.
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Doug Dartos hates Cockaigne and all it stands for, so when he finds five naked teenagers in woodland outside the border he warns them off, with unexpected consequences.
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This story starts well with a great sex scene and then delves into the premise of the story, one half of a couple is interested in having a threesome. This stems from me wondering what a threesome might be like and so I thought if I wrote about one then I might get some idea. I still find the idea strange. I find it difficult enough to concentrate on one lover, never mind two. But then I suppose most threesomes are just about sex and not making love. Too many limbs, too many dicks and too many holes, I still don’t know how people manage it.
I found the threesome difficult to write for it to make sense without just saying, Neil did this to Stephen, Stephen did this to me and I did this to Neil, then Stephen did that to me. It’s still got to be erotic and make the reader horny.
If any reader has had a threesome then please let me know what your experience was, good or bad.
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A biking holiday to Spain ends badly, with a trip to hospital. Now unable to camp, Jones is forced to dtay at a hotel where he gets surprised by the concierge.
This is another semi-autobiographical story, I’m sure you can guess which part is fictional. It is based on an actual motorbike holiday I took down to Spain where I had an accident very similar to what happened. It even took place before the introduction of the Euro and features the old E111 (pronounced E-One-Eleven) which is now replaced by the EHIC – but now the UK has left the EU even that won’t be valid for us Brits anymore. (Hell, this story is really showing his age.)
It would also be unusual for the Spanish guy at the hotel to be circumcised. I don’t actually remember why I decided to circumcise him, I can only surmise that I wanted to write about a different type of dick.
I think that my earlier stories tend to be overlong, too much preamble and this story has quite a bit of post-able (if that’s a word). I like to think that my writing has got a bit tighter with age, but you can be the judge of that.
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School friends Paul and James go exploring and find a dewpond in the middle of a field. This chance doscovery allows the boys to embrace their true feelings for each other.
I remember learning about dew-ponds somewhere, it may have been one of the times I was bored and browsing Wikipedia. I found the idea of them intriguing and the romantic myth of how they came about. As I mention in the story, they are generally man-made and filled by rain. But why stop reality ruining a good legend.
My story is about two young friends who go exploring and come across a dew-pond. This is just the backdrop to their realisation of their greater love for each other. I did notice, on re-reading the story I don’t actually mention how old the boys are. In case any of you are wondering they are about fourteen.
It has been a criticism recently that I don’t describe my characters too much. That has been somewhat deliberate so that reader could imagine the characters to be what they wanted and be who they find attractive. I’d be interesting to see hear from you to see if it works. So please let me know your thoughts. I have been trying to include more description in my recent writing.