A Trip To Suddene by David Heulfryn

The time has come to say goodbye to the boys. This is the final instalment of the saga of Max and Finn. They are settled with boyfriends and are enjoying life in Cockaigne. I could write about the boys forever, but the time has come to set them free and continue their lives without me chronicling their most private and intimate moments.

The final part centres on Max’s bully, Neil, and his meeting with his estranged father. The relationship between the boy and his bully has changed. Neil had changed.

I’m not too fond of twee endings and wonder if this could happen in real life. Most of us would have been bullied in our lives if not for being gay or identifying as anything other than straight; then it would be because of your ginger hair, your glasses, perhaps a stutter, or a limp. But it is because of Max’s sheer force of will that he never gave up on Neil, despite his friends and family not understanding. I am so proud of Max!

So, just as we leave Max and Finn, we leave 2023. I’m not sad to see it go, and I hope 2024 will be a better year for everyone.

So, happy New Year and stories from Cockaigne will continue.

Rating: 4.8/5. From 3 votes.
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2 Replies to “A Trip To Suddene by David Heulfryn”

  1. David,

    I’ve followed Max and Finn’s story since the beginning. Thank you for a GREAT story. I’ve eagerly anticipated each chapter and am sad to see it come to an end.

    I eagerly await your next creation.

    Thanks again,

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    1. Well this chapter of the Fletcher brothers is done. They will be missed.

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